
You have a strong exterior, but a broken interior.
You feel you are complete, but you still fear of being incomplete.
You are beautiful outside, but he never saw your heart inside.
You wanted his heart, but he only wanted your body part.
You got his eyes full of lust instead of his trust.
You wanted to get some attention, but he just felt some attraction.
You expected a life full of treasury, but only got misery.
You thought he was your knight, but he only caused you plight.
You said everything is okay whenever your gut said but.
You thought he was your hero,but he is not even equal to zero.
You thought he is cool, but he made you a fool.
You loved him so dear, but still failed to keep him near.
You knew his reality will cause you casualty,so you want to let go, but your heart says no.
You are crying sitting still, waiting for him still.
Waiting for him still…….
-Ava Tripathy
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Nicely written. Matured depiction of feelings.
Keep writing
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Thank you so much 😄
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👌👌👌Well-written….Keep it up
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Thank you😄
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Very nice👍
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Glad that you liked it😊
Thank you.
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To love without being loved, the curse of love, but also a great teacher, that brings on the end maturity. 🙂
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Yaa true
Thank you for sharing your views 😄
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So many times this is a reality:(
Great writing.
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Glad that you like it😊
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Loved your poem. Thanks for visiting and following my blog. Look forward to reading more.
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A tragic yet well penned poem.
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Thank you so much 😊
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You are welcome.. 😊
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Superb my friend 😉😎👍🙏
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Thanks for visiting 😊
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Great poem! Keep writing!😀
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Thank you so much Sir😊
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“As the kindled fire consumes the fuel, so in the flame of wisdom the embers of action are burnt to ashes.” You have conveyed the action and clarity of thought with aplomb.
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Thank you so much for your kind read sir😊
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Can totally relate to the feelings!! Very well written poem, if you hadn’t told, I wouldn’t have guessed it’s your first attempt. 🙂
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Nice..
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Very nice. My heart was struck with these words – You are crying sitting still, waiting for him still. 😢😢😢
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Well penned down poem..!!
I however believe that women don’t need any “knight” in shining armours when they themselves can be “Queens” in Shining Armours.. 😊😊 Remember one of your posts which said “Be yourself”.. and for that, women don’t need anyone else’s companionship for happiness..!!
The lessons you depicted here are quite sad. But hope that the protagonist takes the reigns and crowns herself the “Queen” who is independent and inspiring, and needs no “kinght’s” support.. 😊😊
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Aww… that’s extremely sweet of you
I seriously hope everyone starts thinking like you..world will be a different place to live in.
And this was a fictional poem which I wrote because I liked the rhyming scheme, though I don’t appreciate and believe the happenings in the poem.
Thank you for sharing your valuable thoughts 😊😇.
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You are welcome Ava..!! 😊😊
Well, firstly, the onus of taking the reigns of their own lives lie with the women themselves.. They must behave and believe in themselves that they aren’t some “damsels in distress” but “Queens in Shining Armours”.. That belief and supporting actions is half the battle won.. 😊😊
Good that you don’t believe in the events or feelings as described in the poem.. 😊😊
Liked reading it.. 😊😊 Thank you for sharing..!!
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Well said…
It’s sad but true.
It’s nice to read your wonderful opinions.
Keep in touch.
Stay safe and happy always 😇😊🌸
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Thank you Ava.. 😊😊
Of course.. You too stay in touch, be happy and safe.. 😊😊
It’s nice meeting you.. 😊😊
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😊😇🌸
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