
A man full of curiosity,
With many questions in mind,
Finally decides to ask whom and why.
He asked a Koel,
What if you weren’t black?
You would’ve looked pretty.
He asked the sky,
What if you weren’t endless?
You would’ve suffered less.
He asked the mountains,
What if you weren’t that tall?
You won’t have been so lonely.
He asked the sea,
What if your water was not salty,
People would’ve loved you more.
He asked a rose,
What if you lose your thorns?
You would’ve been more adorable.
He asked the trees,
Only if you could move,
You would save yourselves.
They all said in unionism,
O man if only you could judge less,
It would’ve been so great!
-Ava Tripathy.
Our judgments judge us, and nothing reveals us, exposes our weaknesses, more ingeniously than the attitude of pronouncing upon our fellows.
–Paul Valery
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Inner CuLTuRES of Cooperation
Or Competition The Second One
Always First Wanting To Win
At All Costs
Bringing
Someone
Else Down
Trying To Lift A Notch Ahead
Yet Where There is Enough Within
Full Of Love In Abundance Without Fear
There is No Reason
To Judge to Bring
Someone Else
Down
For True At
The Top of the
Pyramid of Joy
Within Hands Only
Go One Way Lifting Up
In Cooperation As Every
Hand Will Come in Handy to Help Out
As This iS A Way We Thrive Most Cooperation
ALLoWinG Everyone To Paint New Colors Moving
Out
of
Cave
Art Before
Hehe Generally
Speaking i Find
A Way to Help Create
Smiles As Once A Smile
Arrives Division in Con-Social Emotions Disappear..:)
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So beautifully described,
Thank you so much!
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SMiles Dear Ava Always
So Nice to See You on
Friday Night And Always
A Pleasure Inspired By
All You Write Will Surely
Be By To Visit Your
Blog Post Tonight
Always
Look
Forward
To it my FRiEnD😊🤗
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So beautiful as always 🖤
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Sure!!
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Lovely!
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Hey Nehal,
Thank you so much!
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Ok, congrats!
Ok I will.
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Very beautiful verses Ava! Have a nice day!
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Excellent post. It in effect lists out our agonies categorically missing:
Our beauty, limitlessness, community, savory, strength and mobility.
Nice contemplation, thank you!
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First of all , the divine love , light , blessings and wealth are more than enough for all people and creatures plus we are all expressions of the divine blessings and love .
Everything is as it should be by the divine …
If the sea had no salt , it would spoil … Salt is necassary for balance in nature …
If the sky was limited or life in general was all known and limited , it would lose its mystery and space for introspection and discovery …
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Wonderful!
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So beautifully explained!
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Haha!!! Great 😂😂👏👏👏👏
And very true, loved it
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Amazing it is!
The ending and the message conveyed through it is very beautiful✨❤
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Beautiful message in your well crafted poetry Ava!❤️
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You’re welcome… will do!
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Nice… couldn’t click on.. are we following each other?
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I don’t think we were, just followed you
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Very very inspirational👌👌👌loved it!!
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Hands down the best thing I read today!! 👏👏
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I like this. Perception is reality, beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and such. Judgements are based on what we are taught to perceive. As a kid, I read the book Clan of the Cave Bear. It was a world in which everything I had been taught to believe as good or superior was the opposite. I learned then, a long long time ago, that perceptions have the capacity for change. What we judge now to be superior….years from now, may not be. Everything has its purpose under the sun, its usefulness….just depends on how we see it and how open we are to it. Thanks for a good read!
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So beautifully explained!
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Soo beautiful
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